Wednesday, September 16, 2009

The Rim




Major Charaters:


  • Kamael Agon
  • Mason Debere

Chapters:

Chapter 1
tense - present
setting - bathroom, in front of a broken mirror, suicide attempt(cut throat from the broken piece of glass)
transition, eye to sun (may eye defect c Kamael), (description of kamael physically)


Chapter 2
tense - past (from her childhood days)
setting - a remote village where she grew up
characters - mom, dad, Mason
the chapter will unfold the incident
and origin of the role of mason in her life


Chapter 3
tense - future
the chapter unravel the dream and hopes,
might have been happenings in her life
sun to moon

Chapter 4
tense - present
midnight - a scene of man in a hurry
in a worried look....(description of mason physically)
moon to sun


Chapter 5
tense - past
this chapter
explicate how the relationship
between mason and kamael sprung
(their sweet moments together, what they are used to be)
transition sun into the opening of a trash can with a crumpled paper

Chapter 6
the letter from mason
a discussion and analysis about what happened to them


Chapter 7
tense - present
setting - porch and
the man entering a house
to the bathroom,
he stops kamael
and then ask for apology